Due to some really good feedback on the book I have decided to do a rewrite and put it into a single person view. This will take some time but based on everyone’s input the book has a great story line but is hard to follow due to the changes in narration. Having been my first book this whole ordeal has been on huge learning curve. I hope to have this rewrite done in the next 6-9 months but we will see. I am basically starting over in several chapters.
Wish me luck.